11/16/09





so many stars like kisses blown by the moon --

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battalion of geese
taking wing --
tiny skidmarks on the sky




4 comments:

  1. Beautiful! I love haiku because it is very visual for me. I thought you might like to check out this link to The Boreal Poetry Gartden created by a friend of mine who is an artist and a poet. http://www.marlenecreates.ca/works/2005boreal.html#thumb

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  2. Margaret -- Many thanks and yes, I will go visit your friend's site -- thanks!!!

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  3. You are a creative poet.
    It is the description of an elegant scene.

    Thank you for wonderful comment.

    ruma

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  4. So happy you visited, Ruma. I am honored and terribly pleased!

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